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Slithice (another hero attempt)

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  • #31
    Originally posted by xXQuatchiXx View Post
    Again a Siren are mythical creatures said to have outworldly beauty to lure sailors in so that the Sirens could feed off them.

    So if she is not beautiful she would not be a siren
    Whoops, those are not nagas files. They are medusa's - my mistake.

    Naga SHOULD be attractive.

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    • #32
      =P

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      • #33
        Originally posted by Crazy Dave View Post
        I'm reading, I'm reading, I'm reading....

        Then BOOM, I see a new name (Sanderal) without any acknowledgement as to who this guy is. From context, I can only assume that he's the castaway. Therefore, I suggest that you say:

        "That night, the castaway, a man called Sanderal, awoke...

        Anti-confusions edits, that's it. Not a bad story, to be sure. My only comment, story wise, is that it bears an uncanny resemblance, in some small ways, to "The Little Mermaid."
        Well, I'm not the story creator, I just edited it. Anyway, what if "The Little Mermaid" is Quatchi's favorite story?


        About the "BOOM, new name" thing: It's intentional.
        Yes, you were reading a story, and there was a guy. Period. Then there was a name, describing a person who fits said guy. Done, that's the guy's name.

        Please notice that the original story does have something on the lines you pointed, but I thought it was unneeded and removed it, making the story shorter without damaging the context.

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        • #34
          Originally posted by 0verp0wer_BR View Post
          Well, I'm not the story creator, I just edited it. Anyway, what if "The Little Mermaid" is Quatchi's favorite story?
          Ya bro! Wut you have against that story? It has action drama romance a great character development >=(

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          • #35
            ^I've nothing against it, apparently Crazy Dave has...

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            • #36
              bumpy bump, just checked the unreleased model of slithice, and I have to say "Valve... I am disappointed..."

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              • #37
                ..... I actually like it, particularly when I saw the concept art. Frankly, like most other heroes, it looks like Valve is taking their own spin on sirens rather than sticking to predefined tropes. And no offense, but there was nothing particularly original about your story, except for the Slardar tie-in, and now I'm curious to see what Valve has planned for her.
                Everyone has a story.

                For a list of all fan lores of unreleased heroes, http://dev.dota2.com/showthread.php?t=37955.

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