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[Hero Idea] Zeppelin

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  • [Hero Idea] Zeppelin

    Zeppelin <- I couldn't find better
    Dire Strength
    Sorry for potentially bad English

    So, I was thinking about making a hero with the WC3 Zeppelin model since a long time and instead of letting all the ideas haunt my mind for the rest of my life,
    I decided to try to make something that fitted my playstyle. It ended up being a Support with a nice Initiation and lot of utilities.
    Enjoy! (Or not)


    Numbers are highly subjectives.

    Base attack time: 1.5 (default is 1.7)
    Attack Range: 425

    ([Q] Artificial Storm)
    Release a electrically charged cloud over target location. After a short delay, enemies in the area are damaged and repeadetly stunned until end of duration.

    Range: 475
    Delay: 0.8
    Duration: 4
    Radius: 300
    Damage per interval: 12/34/46/58
    Stun duration: 0.1/0.15/0.2/0.25
    Stun and Damage Interval: 0.5
    Cooldown: 15s
    Manacost: 90/105/130/155
    +The ability only affect heroes within the area for the duration

    ([W] Gluey Tar)
    Zeppelin impregnate his attack with a dark mixture slowing nearby enemies. Multiple attacks stack and refresh the duration.

    Duration: 5
    Slow Radius: 175
    Movement speed slow per Attack: 10%
    Attack speed slow per Attack: 10%
    Manacost: 15
    +Auto-Cast/Attack Modifier
    +Stack up to 2/3/4/5 times



    ([E] Summon Little Boy)
    Zeppelin activate one of his devastating robots. Little Boy can't attack but possess the Self-Destruct ability.
    Basically just a walking bomb that goes boom

    Duration: 12
    Hero Attacks to kill: 3/3/4/4
    Movement Speed: 410/420/430/440
    Bounty: 75
    Cooldown: 18
    Manacost: 125/140/155/170
    + Zeppelin also get Little Boy's Self Destruct as a Sub-Ability

    ([D/Little Boy] Self-Destruct)
    Little Boy explode after a short delay, dealing damage and stunning nearby enemies.

    Explosion Delay: 0.4
    Stun duration: 1/1.5/2/2.5
    Explosion Radius: 250
    Explosion Damage: 80/160/240/320


    ([R] All Aboard!)
    Load every nearby allied heroes inside Zeppelin. Also receive Flying and additional Movement Speed but greatly reduced Turn Rate.
    Can be reactivated to Unload and lose all buffs.


    Load Radius: 200
    Duration: 8
    Movement Speed Bonus: 20%/26%/32%
    Base Turn rate: 0.1
    Cooldown: 100/80/60
    Manacost: 125
    +Disable Teleportation Scroll and Travel boots for the duration

    What you guys think!?
    Last edited by IGull; 03-22-2014, 11:21 AM.

  • #2
    Originally posted by IGull View Post


    Zeppelin impregnate his attack with a sticky mixture slowing nearby enemies. Multiple attacks stack and refresh the duration.
    creepy wording here

    third skill is op as hell. rest are pretty boring.
    big plays
    i'm keeping the gif because it's so awful

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    • #3
      3rd skill is horribly imbalanced, everything else is meh, the ult I like a bit.

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      • #4
        Ulti is very weak. 2 hero attacks? You need 13 sec to deal 300 damage ? Qop does double that in 13 sec with non-ulti. You either make damage 600 or so or you just make the robot stronger. Way stronger !

        Third skill seems slightly imba. Make it not global and you got yourself a better skill.

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        • #5
          First skill way to OP too....
          800 AOE dmg with stun...

          I would change the ulti too:

          Name: Everyone on board.

          You can load friendly heroes into your zepplin:

          1/2/3 heroes per level

          you gain flying movement and speedbonus

          10/20/30 %
          120/100/80 sek cd
          Scpter: 60sek cd 4 heroes
          Last edited by KL!.exe; 03-22-2014, 04:59 AM.

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          • #6
            Originally posted by KL!.exe View Post
            First skill way to OP too....
            800 AOE dmg with stun...

            I would change the ulti too:

            Name: Everyone on board.

            You can load friendly heroes into your zepplin:

            1/2/3 heroes per level

            you gain flying movement and speedbonus

            10/20/30 %
            120/100/80 sek cd
            Scpter: 60sek cd 4 heroes
            nice idea. The current ult is pretty boring and superfluous.
            My Workshop!

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            • #7
              Originally posted by Sa1nt View Post
              Ulti is very weak. 2 hero attacks? You need 13 sec to deal 300 damage ? Qop does double that in 13 sec with non-ulti. You either make damage 600 or so or you just make the robot stronger. Way stronger !

              Third skill seems slightly imba. Make it not global and you got yourself a better skill.
              I tried too hard to make his ultimate balanced for early games (you can easily gank other lanes without moving your hero) and never really thought about late game where you wouldn't have the time to sneak it

              As for his [E], I tried to make a skill that would help his ult sneak around while also being able to help his teammates.
              Why is it global? Because a single-target Smoke don't really make good team ganks and the duration at early levels don't make it possible to keep the invis on 2 heroes
              " tp mid and invis me "

              I will most likely replace it.

              Originally posted by KL!.exe View Post
              First skill way to OP too....
              800 AOE dmg with stun...

              I would change the ulti too:

              Name: Everyone on board.

              You can load friendly heroes into your zepplin:

              1/2/3 heroes per level

              you gain flying movement and speedbonus

              10/20/30 %
              120/100/80 sek cd
              Scpter: 60sek cd 4 heroes
              Edited his [Q] to make it more understandable

              I actually wanted to use the Zeppelin's Load ability... but I don't know... might actually work.

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              • #8
                Originally posted by KL!.exe View Post
                First skill way to OP too....
                800 AOE dmg with stun...

                I would change the ulti too:

                Name: Everyone on board.

                You can load friendly heroes into your zepplin:

                1/2/3 heroes per level

                you gain flying movement and speedbonus

                10/20/30 %
                120/100/80 sek cd
                Scpter: 60sek cd 4 heroes
                This is an interesting concept. It's like reverse infest where you let other heroes infest you.

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by KL!.exe View Post
                  First skill way to OP too....
                  800 AOE dmg with stun...

                  I would change the ulti too:

                  Name: Everyone on board.

                  You can load friendly heroes into your zepplin:

                  1/2/3 heroes per level

                  you gain flying movement and speedbonus

                  10/20/30 %
                  120/100/80 sek cd
                  Scpter: 60sek cd 4 heroes
                  This would be the. most. OP. THING. EVER. Buy boots of travel => 4 man TP. And also flying ? You get blink and you get SO OP !

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                  • #10
                    UPDATED!
                    Now also Strength; seems more fitting
                    Last edited by IGull; 03-22-2014, 11:07 AM.

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by Sa1nt View Post
                      This would be the. most. OP. THING. EVER. Buy boots of travel => 4 man TP. And also flying ? You get blink and you get SO OP !
                      OP spells ca be alanced with high CD MC

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by Sa1nt View Post
                        This would be the. most. OP. THING. EVER. Buy boots of travel => 4 man TP. And also flying ? You get blink and you get SO OP !
                        I don't think it's any op, Don't forget that there's Underlord that tp his whole team. Zeppelin also gonna get focused hard if he load everyone

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by Sa1nt View Post
                          This would be the. most. OP. THING. EVER. Buy boots of travel => 4 man TP. And also flying ? You get blink and you get SO OP !
                          Pit lord anyone?
                          My Workshop!

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                          • #14
                            Pit lord has a bigger delay, a bigger CD and as mentioned , this spell has already been created and attached to a hero therefore it would be stupid to create the same spell twice.

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                            • #15
                              Numbers can be tweaked

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