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    [Broodmother] Several fixes and additions to her ability & modifier tooltips

    Broodmother's tooltips are overall fine. Spin Web is a bit messy and could use a clean up, but besides that, they are fine.

    Here are changes I applied

    Spawn Spiderlings:
    1. Added info about Spiderlings to the description. Shortened the already existing text a bit so it's not much longer than before
    2. Added debuff duration to the traits, and removed it from the ALT notes
    3. Added info about Spiderites as an ALT note
    4. Added projectile info (speed and disjoint) as an ALT note
    5. Hid the talent buff on the spiders, since it carries no informational value
    5.2 Alternatively, add a description and a proper name to it, if you want to keep it visible

    Spin Web:
    1. Cleaned up the description and split it into 2 paragraphs. First paragraph tells what the webs do. Second paragraph provides info about the ability behaviors (cast range, max webs, and destroying webs)
    2. Reworded ALT notes to be more in style
    3. Added radius to the ability traits. Also moved the damage slow duration here.
    4. Reworded slow debuff to include the loss of unobstructed movement and to be more in style

    Incapacitating Bite:
    1. Removed the redundant ALT note.
    2. Reworded debuff to be more in style

    Insatiable Hunger:
    1. Changed "vampiric" to "lifesteal" in description. Also added short description to what lifesteal does, like how the lifesteal items do it.
    2. Reworded buff to be more in style

    Poison Sting:
    1. Reworded description to fit the default style.
    2. Added ability lore text
    3. Reworded debuff to be more in style

    Spawn Spiderite:
    1. Reworded description to fit the default style.
    2. Added ability lore text

    Destroy Spin Web:
    1. Added ability lore text

    Talents:
    1. Reworded "+14 Spiders Attack Damage" to "+14 Spiderling/Spiderite Attack Damage
    2. Reworded "+225 Spiders Health" to "+225 Spiderling/Spiderite Health


    Image comparing the changes to the current tooltips (I also changed up the buff and debuff texts a bit, to give them more life)
    Spoiler: 


    And here are the modified dota_english.txt and npc_abilities.txt

    Code:
    		//BROODMOTHER
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spawn_spiderlings"							"Spawn Spiderlings"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spawn_spiderlings_Description"				"Injects spider eggs into an enemy unit, dealing damage. If the target dies while affected, Spiderlings hatch from it.<br><br>Spiderlings are small units which apply a damaging and slowing poison on their attack targets and inject Spiderite eggs into their targets."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spawn_spiderlings_Lore"						"Black Arachnia continues to raise her young, even amidst the field of combat. The brood quickly learns how to support their mother."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spawn_spiderlings_Note0"						"Spiderites are smaller versions on Spiderlings, but without abilities."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spawn_spiderlings_Note1"						"The projectile travels at a speed of 1200 and can be disjointed."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spawn_spiderlings_spiderling_duration"		"LIFETIME:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spawn_spiderlings_damage"						"DAMAGE:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spawn_spiderlings_count"						"SPIDERLING COUNT:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spawn_spiderlings_buff_duration"				"DEBUFF DURATION:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web"										"Spin Web"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web_Description"							"Spins a giant web at the target area, that renders Broodmother and her brood invisible, grants them unobstructed movement and increases their movement speed and health regeneration. When taking damage, the movement speed bonus is reduced and the unobstructed movement is lost for some time.<br><br>Spin Web can be cast from anywhere as long as the new web touches an existing web. Webs do not expire, and can be manually destoryed. When the maximum limit of webs is exceeded, the oldest web disappears."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web_Lore"								"Weaving a bed of silken fibers, Arachnia's web both protects her and her offspring, as well as giving advancing opponents a sense of forboding."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web_Note0"								"The invisibility has a fade time of 2 seconds."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web_Note1"								"When losing the unobstructed movement, trees around the spider get destroyed in a 150 radius."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web_count"								"MAX WEBS:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web_heath_regen"							"HEALTH REGEN:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web_invis_movespeed_tooltip"				"%MOVE INCREASE:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web_max_charges"							"MAX WEB CHARGES:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web_charge_restore_time"					"CHARGE RESTORE TIME:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web_radius"								"WEB RADIUS:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web_damage_time"							"DAMAGE SLOW DURATION:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web_destroy"								"Destroy Spin Web"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web_destroy_Description"					"Destroys the selected Spin Web."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spin_web_destroy_Lore"						"Even the most skilled web spinners have their limits."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_incapacitating_bite"							"Incapacitating Bite"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_incapacitating_bite_Description"				"Broodmother's venom cripples enemy units, causing her attacks to slow and giving the affected unit a chance to miss its attacks."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_incapacitating_bite_Lore"						"Paralytic toxins come from Black Arachnia's fangs, causing a slow and painful death to those who intrude on her webs."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_incapacitating_bite_miss_chance"				"%MISS CHANCE:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_incapacitating_bite_bonus_movespeed"			"%MOVE SLOW:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_incapacitating_bite_duration"					"DURATION:"		
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_insatiable_hunger"							"Insatiable Hunger"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_insatiable_hunger_Description"				"A violent lust for vital fluids increases Broodmother's attack damage and grants her lifesteal, healing her for a percentage of attack damage dealt on each attack."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_insatiable_hunger_Lore"						"While most of her prey is wrapped in silken cocoons and saved for her young, the Broodmother herself has a taste for wandering heroes."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_insatiable_hunger_Note0"						"Fully stacks with other sources of lifesteal."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_insatiable_hunger_bonus_damage"				"BONUS DAMAGE:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_insatiable_hunger_lifesteal_pct"				"%LIFESTEAL:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_insatiable_hunger_duration"					"DURATION:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_poison_sting"									"Poison Sting"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_poison_sting_Description"						"Poisons the attack target on each attack, dealing damage per second and slowing its movement speed. Heroes can resist the poison easier than other units."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_poison_sting_Lore"							"Not as potent as the toxins of the Broodmother, but still something to reckon with."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_poison_sting_damage_per_second"				"DAMAGE PER SECOND:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_poison_sting_movement_speed"					"%MOVEMENT SPEED SLOW:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_poison_sting_duration_hero"					"HERO DURATION:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_poison_sting_duration"						"CREEP DURATION:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spawn_spiderite"								"Spawn Spiderite"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spawn_spiderite_Description"					"Injects a Spiderite egg into the target with each attack. If the target dies while affected, a Spiderite hatches from it.<br><br>Spiderites are small units without any abilities."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spawn_spiderite_Lore"							"Spiderites originate from the Broodmother as well, the Spiderlings merely transfer them."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spawn_spiderite_spiderite_duration"			"LIFETIME:"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_broodmother_spawn_spiderite_buff_duration"				"DEBUFF DURATION:"
    		"npc_dota_hero_broodmother_bio"													"For centuries, Black Arachnia the Broodmother lurked in the dark lava tubes beneath the smoldering caldera of Mount Pyrotheos, raising millions of spiderlings in safety before sending them to find prey in the wide world above. In a later age, the Vizier of Greed, Ptholopthales, erected his lodestone ziggurat on the slopes of the dead volcano, knowing that any looters who sought his magnetic wealth must survive the spider-haunted passages. After millennia of maternal peace, Black Arachnia found herself beset by a steady trickle of furfeet and cutpurses, bold knights and noble youths--all of them delicious, certainly, and yet tending to create a less than nurturing environment for her innocent offspring. Tiring of the intrusions, she paid a visit to Ptholopthales; and when he proved unwilling to discuss a compromise, she wrapped the Vizier in silk and set him aside to be the centerpiece of a special birthday feast. Unfortunately, the absence of the Magnetic Ziggurat's master merely emboldened a new generation of intruders. When one of her newborns was trodden underfoot by a clumsy adventurer, she reached the end of her silken rope. Broodmother headed for the surface, declaring her intent to rid the world of each and every possible invader, down to the last Hero if necessary, until she could ensure her nursery might once more be a safe and wholesome environment for her precious spiderspawn."
    
    
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_spawn_spiderlings"					"Spawn Spiderlings"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_spawn_spiderlings_Description"		"When dying while having this debuff, Spiderlings will spawn."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_spin_web"							"Spin Web"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_spin_web_Description"				"Gaining %dMODIFIER_PROPERTY_HEALTH_REGEN_CONSTANT% health regeneration and %dMODIFIER_PROPERTY_MOVESPEED_BONUS_PERCENTAGE%%% movement speed."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_spin_web_charge_counter"				"Spin Web Charges"		
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_spin_web_charge_counter_Description"	"You may cast Spin Web whenever there is a charge available."		
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_spin_web_slowed"						"Spin Web Slow"		
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_spin_web_slowed_Description"			"Movement speed slowed by %dMODIFIER_PROPERTY_MOVESPEED_BONUS_PERCENTAGE%%% and unobstructed movement disabled for taking damage while in a web."		
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_incapacitating_bite_orb"				"Incapacitating Bite"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_incapacitating_bite_orb_Description"	"%dMODIFIER_PROPERTY_MISS_PERCENTAGE%%% chance to miss on attacks and movement speed slowed by %dMODIFIER_PROPERTY_MOVESPEED_BONUS_PERCENTAGE%%%."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_insatiable_hunger"					"Insatiable Hunger"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_insatiable_hunger_Description"		"Gaining %dMODIFIER_PROPERTY_PREATTACK_BONUS_DAMAGE% attack damage and %dMODIFIER_PROPERTY_TOOLTIP%%% lifesteal."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_spawn_spiderite_debuff"				"Spawn Spiderite"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_spawn_spiderite_debuff_Description"	"When dying while having this debuff, a Spiderite will spawn."
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_poison_sting_debuff"					"Poison Sting"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_modifier_broodmother_poison_sting_debuff_Description"		"Movement speed slowed by %dMODIFIER_PROPERTY_MOVESPEED_BONUS_PERCENTAGE%%% and taking %dMODIFIER_PROPERTY_TOOLTIP% damage per second."
    
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_special_bonus_unique_broodmother_1"	"+8 Max Webs"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_special_bonus_unique_broodmother_2"	"+225 Spiderling/Spiderite Health"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_special_bonus_unique_broodmother_3"	"+60 Spawn Spiderling Damage"
    		"DOTA_Tooltip_ability_special_bonus_unique_broodmother_4"	"+14 Spiderling/Spiderite Attack Damage"
    Last edited by bu3ny; 09-17-2017 at 10:43 AM.
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