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    Pudge

    In the Fields of Endless Carnage, far to the south of Quoidge, a corpulent figure works tirelessly through the night--dismembering, disembowelling, piling up the limbs and viscera of the Fallen that the battlefield might be clear by dawn. In this cursed realm, nothing can decay or decompose; no corpse may ever return to the earth from which it sprang, no matter how deep you dig the grave. Flocked by carrion birds who need him to cut their meals into beak-sized chunks, the Butcher hones his skills with blades that grow sharper the longer he uses them. Swish, swish, thunk. Flesh falls from the bone; tendons and ligaments part like paper. And while he always had a taste for the butchery, over the ages, Pudge has developed a taste for its byproduct as well. Starting with a gobbet of muscle here, a sip of blood there...before long he was thrusting his jaws deep into the toughest of torsos, like a terrier gnawing at rags. Even those who are beyond fearing the Reaper, fear the Butcher.

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    Core Tester Otter's Avatar
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    This seems sufficiently horrifying to fit Pudge, I like it.

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    I love that last line

    I want know more about the fields of Carnage, the story itself is awesome imo.

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    It needs a connection with one hero, to improve it

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    ^ Fear the reaper -> Necro He already has

    This story is brilliant.

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